mark
I think its best ur colleague seeks the advice of a muslim lawyer. she can always call the law society up to direct her to one if she doesn't know of any.
don't think anyone of us here would be in the position to give advice here.
erm - how come its only your parents' names at the top? Whether you are going to include your fiance's dad's wife's name or not, it would look abit odd that his dad's name is close to the bottom & not at the top together with your folks?